Who in your life has been your biggest influence and why?
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HOMEWORK FOR TODAY
Who in your life has been your biggest influence and why?
1. Hyun Ja-Lim give to me the best influence.
2. She was my paint teacher and supported to me.
3. She taught me 4 years. I studied with her for 4 years.
4. So I growed up to be a painter.
5. She is female artist and the famous painter, and 71 years old but she is passoionate.
6. I want to be a famous artist like her.
7. I thought her passion is great.
8. I always appreciate her.
>> YOU CAN MAKE A SHORT ESSAY FOR YOUR ANSWER.
>>THE PERSON WHO HAD THE BIGGEST INFLUENCE IN MY LIFE IS HYUN JA-LIM. A 71 YEARS OLD, FAMOUS AND PASSIONATE FEMALE PAINTER. SHE WAS MY PAINTING TEACHER FOR 4 YEARS AND SHE SUPPORTED ME A LOT. I GREW UP TO BE A PAINTER BECAUSE OF HER. I WANT TO BECOME AS FAMOUS AS HYUN JA-LIM. SHE ALWAYS HAVE THAT PASSION AT WORK AND I ALWAYS APPRECIATE IT.
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