Who influenced you the most in life?

2022-07-07 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I can say my parents, but it was my older sister who had a bigger impact. Even though we will fight when we\'re together. I learned a lot of things from her like curse words, how to play a piano, how to cook and why I will be a mechanic. Actually, I had nothing else to do after military service. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic!

Your sister had a big role in your life :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon.

I can say my parents, but it was my older sister who had a bigger impact.

>> I can say that it is my parents but in reality, it is my older sister.

Even though we will fight when we\'re together.

>> Even though we fight when we\'re together, I leaned a lot of things from her like curse words, how to play the piano, how to cook and she inspired me to be a mechanic.

I learned a lot of things from her like curse words, how to play a piano, how to cook and why I will be a mechanic.

>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.

Actually, I had nothing else to do after military service. :)

>> CORRECT

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