Who inspired you to become who you are now?
학생이 쓴 원문
I have be inspired many people for my whole life.
My parents, friends, teachers and coworkers etc inspired me.
I worked with airplain pilots during soldier. they were strong and obsereved the rule. I learned a lot to them especially life attitude .
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Hi there! It’s great to see you completed the homework. You shared your ideas beautifully—keep up the amazing work!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
I have be inspired many people for my whole life.
>> I have been inspired by many people throughout my life.
My parents, friends, teachers and coworkers etc inspired me.
>> My parents, friends, teachers, and coworkers have all inspired me.
I worked with airplain pilots during soldier. they were strong and obsereved the rule.
>> When I was a soldier, I worked with airplane pilots. They were strong and followed the rules.
I learned a lot to them especially life attitude.
>> I learned a lot from them, especially about life attitude.
>> I have been inspired by many people throughout my life.
My parents, friends, teachers and coworkers etc inspired me.
>> My parents, friends, teachers, and coworkers have all inspired me.
I worked with airplain pilots during soldier. they were strong and obsereved the rule.
>> When I was a soldier, I worked with airplane pilots. They were strong and followed the rules.
I learned a lot to them especially life attitude.
>> I learned a lot from them, especially about life attitude.
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