Who is a successful person that you admire and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Well, honestly finding a person who I admire is not easy. As even though I like him or her, I don\'t admire them in some ways. For this reason I find out the person who is my professor in my college. At that time, it was not a piece of cake to study abroad especially for studying English. But my professor Mrs. [Name] studied it by herself a couple of years. Eventually she mastered it and was able to say free-talking with foreigners without any trouble. Hence I admired her willing and effort. Apart from that, she was really a proactive person so I liked to talk with her about my future, dream and even concern about dating with my boyfriend.
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]!
Admiring someone means that they have something that we probably do not possess just yet. These people may have trained or worked hard to have these skills. Nonetheless, we can also achieve the level of wisdom or skills that they have.
Who knows, someone out there also admires you for your work or characteristics.
See you later in class!
-T. Donna =)
>> Correct!
As even though I like him or her, I don\'t admire them in some ways.
>> Correct!
For this reason I find out the person who is my professor in my college.
>> For this reason, I found a person who is my professor in my college.
At that time, it was not a piece of cake to study abroad especially for studying English.
>> At that time, it was not a piece of cake to study abroad especially for English.
But my professor Mrs. [Name] studied it by herself a couple of years.
>> Correct!
Eventually she mastered it and was able to say free-talking with foreigners without any trouble.
>> Correct!
Or: Eventually she mastered it and was able to talk freely with foreigners without any trouble.
Hence I admired her willing and effort.
>> Hence I admired her willingness and effort.
Apart from that, she was really a proactive person so I liked to talk with her about my future, dream and even concern about dating with my boyfriend.
>> Correct!
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