Who is an author that you like? Why do you like his books?

2017-03-27 · 첨삭 강사 Kelly

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An author I like is YunDongJoo. There are two reasons to support my answer. The first reason is that he makes me realize how much my country is precious. He wrote a lot of poems for independence in the period that our country was invaded by Japan. Another reason is that his poems are interesting. They have many implicative words, so it allows me to think about what the words mean. In conclusion, my favorite author is YunDongJoo for these reasons.

강사 첨삭

Hi there, [이름]!

Thank you for doing your homework diligently. Keep up the good work!

~Kelly^^

An author I like is YunDongJoo.

>> Correct.

OR:

>> The author I like is YunDongJoo.

There are two reasons to support my answer.

>> Correct.
The first reason is that he makes me realize how much my country is precious.

>> The first reason is that he makes me realize how precious my country is.

He wrote a lot of poems for independence in the period that our country was invaded by Japan.

>> Correct.

OR: He wrote poems about independence when our country was invaded by Japan.
Another reason is that his poems are interesting.

>> Correct.

They have many implicative words, so it allows me to think about what the words mean.

>> Correct.
In conclusion, my favorite author is YunDongJoo for these reasons.

>> Correct.

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