Who is an international star that you would like to see in a concert? Answer in a few sentences.
학생이 쓴 원문
If I have a chance to see an international star, I would choose Ariana Grande. I was interested in her when I heard a carol song called ‘Santa tell me’. Her other songs are also very famous around people of my age. So, i want her to visit Korea again and have a concert.
강사 첨삭
Hi there, Judy!
You have an great taste of musical artists. I am sure that Ariana\'s performance will also blow your mind as IU\'s.
Anyway, your last sentence was the only one that has a suggestion and it is only about the capitalization of the pronoun \'I\'. Nevertheless, you wrote your homework with clarity and adroitness, keep it up!
See you on Wednesday!
-T. Donna~
If I have a chance to see an international star, I would choose Ariana Grande.
>> Correct!
I was interested in her when I heard a carol song called ‘Santa tell me’.
>> Correct!
Her other songs are also very famous around people of my age.
>> Correct!
So, i want her to visit Korea again and have a concert.
>> So, I want her to visit Korea again and have a concert.
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