Who is better at studying. The best and worst thing about studying.
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No one likes studying. If you study what you like, it will be less stressful. However, the problem is that you have to study various subjects that you do not like especially when you go to school. In addition, you have to take exams and you are assessed based on the score you got. The grade can impact you in various ways like when you pursue higher education or get a job. Even if you like studying, it could be very stressful and makes you feel sick and tired sometimes because you might be forced to study regardless of your own will. You do not have many choices about when and how long to study. There are people who are better at studying. How smart, creative, and a good memory you have can be a factor in deciding who is better at studying, however, the most key factor is persistency and concentration. If you have ability to concentrate and continue to study, you will beat other students.Take 5-10 minute breaks minimum and do something physically active to get your blood flowing.
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A fantastic afternoon to you Sir [이름]!It\'s nice to receive a composition from you.
You were able to explain your thoughts well. Great!
You pinpointed the good and bad points as well. I think it depends on the person on how he/ she is going to study.
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Let us discuss this sentence too, \"How smart, creative, and a good memory you have can be a factor in deciding who is better at studying, however, the most key factor is persistency and concentration\".Teacher Nina
No one likes studying.
>> Correct!
If you study what you like, it will be less stressful.
>> Correct!
>> OR; If you are studying what you like, it will be less stressful.
>> OR: If you are intersted in what you are studying, it won\'t be stressful.
However, the problem is that you have to study various subjects that you do not like especially when you go to school.
>> Correct!
In addition, you have to take exams and you are assessed based on the score you got.
>> Correct!
The grade can impact you in various ways like when you pursue higher education or get a job.
>> The grade can be an impact in various ways like when you want to pursue a higher education or get a job,
>> OR: The grade can be of a great impact in diffrent ways such as pursuing a higher education or being employed.
Even if you like studying, it could be very stressful and makes you feel sick and tired sometimes because you might be forced to study regardless of your own will.
>> Correct!
>> OR: Even if you like studying, it could be very stressful. It makes you feel sick and tired sometimes because you might be forced to study regardless of your own will.
You do not have many choices about when and how long to study.
>> Did you mean: You don\'t have many choices, when and for how long are you going to study.
>> OR: You don\'t have many choices about when and for how long are you going to study.
There are people who are better at studying.
>> Correct
>> OR: There are people who are really good at studying.
How smart, creative, and a good memory you have can be a factor in deciding who is better at studying, however, the most key factor is persistency and concentration.
>> Did you mean: It\'s how smart, creative and good memory can be factors in deciding who is better. However, the key factor are persistency and concentration.
>> OR: Being smart, creative or having a good memory can be factors in deciding who is better, though, the most important keys attitude are persistency and concentration.
If you have ability to concentrate and continue to study, you will beat other students.
>> If you have the ability to concentrate and continue studying, you will beat the other students.
Take 5-10 minute breaks minimum and do something physically active to get your blood flowing.
>> Take a minimum of five to ten minutes break and do something physically active to get your blood flowing.
>> OR: Take about five to ten minutes break and do an active exercise to keep your blood flowing.
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