Who is better well educated or skilled person to have a job?

2018-04-30 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Please check your homework below (Answer the questions into 2-3 sentences only.) >> Who is better well educated or skilled person to have a job? I think it depends on the job. Some jobs needs to high educated or skilled person. Our world has a lot of people and various jobs. therefore those people all need to our world. I don’t think. which job is more better than other job. In the final analysis, it’s a matter of personal choice.

강사 첨삭

Hi Yeong!

The third sentence is kind a confusing for me so please check your corrections below and practice you grammar :)

Thank you :)


I think it depends on the job. Some jobs needs to high educated or skilled person. Our world has a lot of people and various jobs.

>> I think it depends on the job or position. Some jobs they need a high educated or skilled person.


Our world has a lot of people and various jobs.
>> Our world has a lot of people and different various jobs.


Therefore those people all need to our world. I don’t think. which job is more better than other job.
>> Therefore, those people who need a job, well I don\'t know what kind of job is are suitable for them.


In the final analysis, it’s a matter of personal choice.
>> In my final analysis, it’s a matter of personal choice.

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