Who is my life hero?

2015-10-22 · 첨삭 강사 Mayleen

학생이 쓴 원문

My life hero is my parents because they made me. Moreover, they are still looking after us so I am really happy. If there is problem or my worries my parent sovle them. If I get hurt the cure me. My mum cooks me a fantastic meals everyday and my dad work so we can live. My second life hero is my friends. They play with me when i am feeling not happy at the moment. We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card. I love it!!!! Who is your life hero? And WHY??

강사 첨삭

Hi Min!:) Happy Thursday!   Just like you, my parents are my life\'s heroes. Without them, I won\'t be here teaching a cute kid named Min^___^ Most people look up to their parents because they are aware of the sacrifices they\'ve made in order to raise their families properly. Now that I\'m a parent too, the more that I came to understand how selfless my parents\' love is.:) So you and Emma better behave okay?:)^.^   Again, Min, I\'m thankful that you accomplished your homework. What a diligent \'hakseng\':p Kindly check the modifications I\'ve made. Please take care. Have a great evening!   ~Teacher Mayleen~     My life hero is my parents because they made me. >> My life\'s heroes are my parents because they gave birth to me.   Moreover, they are still looking after us so I am really happy. >> Moreover, they are still looking after us so I\'m really happy.   If there is problem or my worries my parent sovle them. >> If I have problems or worries, my parents help me solve them. If I get hurt the cure me. >> If I get hurt, they cure me.   My mum cooks me a fantastic meals everyday and my dad work so we can live. >> My mom cooks fantastic meals everyday and my dad goes to work everyday to provide for us. My second life hero is my friends. >> My second life\'s hero are my friends.   They play with me when i am feeling not happy at the moment. >> They cheer me up when I feel unhappy by playing with me.   We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card. I love it!!!! >> We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card, and I love it. Who is your life hero? And WHY?? >> Who is your life\'s hero and why?

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