Who is my life hero?
학생이 쓴 원문
My life hero is my parents because they made me. Moreover, they are still looking after us so I am really happy. If there is problem or my worries my parent sovle them.
If I get hurt the cure me. My mum cooks me a fantastic meals everyday and my dad work so we can live.
My second life hero is my friends. They play with me when i am feeling not happy at the moment. We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card. I love it!!!!
Who is your life hero? And WHY??
강사 첨삭
Hi Min!:)
Happy Thursday!
Just like you, my parents are my life\'s heroes. Without them, I won\'t be here teaching a cute kid named Min^___^
Most people look up to their parents because they are aware of the sacrifices they\'ve made in order to raise their families properly.
Now that I\'m a parent too, the more that I came to understand how selfless my parents\' love is.:)
So you and Emma better behave okay?:)^.^
Again, Min, I\'m thankful that you accomplished your homework. What a diligent \'hakseng\':p Kindly check the modifications I\'ve made.
Please take care.
Have a great evening!
~Teacher Mayleen~
My life hero is my parents because they made me.
>> My life\'s heroes are my parents because they gave birth to me.
Moreover, they are still looking after us so I am really happy.
>> Moreover, they are still looking after us so I\'m really happy.
If there is problem or my worries my parent sovle them.
>> If I have problems or worries, my parents help me solve them.
If I get hurt the cure me.
>> If I get hurt, they cure me.
My mum cooks me a fantastic meals everyday and my dad work so we can live.
>> My mom cooks fantastic meals everyday and my dad goes to work everyday to provide for us.
My second life hero is my friends.
>> My second life\'s hero are my friends.
They play with me when i am feeling not happy at the moment.
>> They cheer me up when I feel unhappy by playing with me.
We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card. I love it!!!!
>> We ride bikes, play football, play with the magic card, and I love it.
Who is your life hero? And WHY??
>> Who is your life\'s hero and why?
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