Who is my phone Englih teacher?
학생이 쓴 원문
강사 첨삭
Hello there,
It was nice to talk to you in our class. Yes, my name is Anne. I do appreciate you for asking. I hope that I can help you with improving your English skills.
Nothing can stop the
man with the right mental attitude from achieving his goal; nothing on earth can
help the man with the wrong mental attitude.
T. Anne
Hello.
>>Hello,
Thank you for advising to my essay.
>>Thank you for your advise on my essay.
I fell taht your coaching assist me to upgrade my English ability.
>>I felt that assisting me would upgrade my English ability.
Can I ask a something?
>>Can I ask you something?
Is my phone teacher\'s name ANNE?
>>Is my teacher\'s name Anne?
What is my phone teacher\'s name?
>>What is my teacher\'s name?
>>What is your name?
please tell me.
>>Please tell me.
I want to know her name.
>>correct
SO . When I will receive a call, I will want to tell her \" HI ... NAME\"
>>If I will receive your call, I want to greet you with, \"Hi....Name.\"
Yesterday, Teacher asked me that what is my job and what i want to do , what is my hobby, and so on.
>>Yesterday, my teacher asked me about my job and what I want to do, what is my hobby and so on.
>>Yesterday, my teacher asked me about my personal information, such as:
What is your job?, What I want to do?, What is my hobby? and so on.
I answered that I often go to the cinema for watching movie with my first son.
>>I answered that I often go to the cinema to watch a movie with my first son.
And I started to talk about movie abstract.
>>And I started talking about abstract movies.
>>The title of the movie is \"Brave.\" It is a fictional animation movie which is popular among Korean children.
I am going to talk about remained Brave\' story with teacher on tonight.
>>I am going to talk about the movie with you tonight.
Thank you.
>>correct
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