Who is my phone Englih teacher?

2012-11-28 · 첨삭 강사 Ritchel

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Hello. Thank you for advising to my essay. I fell taht your coaching assist me to upgrade my English ability. Can I ask a something? Is my phone teacher's name ANNE? What is my phone teacher's name? please tell me. I want to know her name. SO . When I will receive a call, I will want to tell her " HI ... NAME" Yesterday, Teacher asked me that what is my job and what i want to do , what is my hobby, and so on. I answered that I often go to the cinema for watching movie with my first son. And I started to talk about movie abstract. That movie's title was a "Brave" It was a fictional anmimation which had a big popularity among Korean chirldren. I am going to talk about remained Brave' story with teacher on tonight. Thank you.

강사 첨삭

Hello there,

It was nice to talk to you in our class. Yes, my name is Anne. I do appreciate you for asking. I hope that I can help you with improving your English skills.

Nothing can stop the man with the right mental attitude from achieving his goal; nothing on earth can help the man with the wrong mental attitude.

T. Anne

Hello.

>>Hello,

Thank you for advising to my essay.

>>Thank you for your advise on my essay.

I fell taht your coaching assist me to upgrade my English ability.

>>I felt that assisting me would upgrade my English ability.

Can I ask a something?

>>Can I ask you something?

Is my phone teacher\'s name ANNE?

>>Is my teacher\'s name Anne?

What is my phone teacher\'s name?

>>What is my teacher\'s name?

>>What is your name?

please tell me.

>>Please tell me.

I want to know her name.

>>correct

SO . When I will receive a call, I will want to tell her \" HI ... NAME\"

>>If I will receive your call, I want to greet you with, \"Hi....Name.\"

Yesterday, Teacher asked me that what is my job and what i want to do , what is my hobby, and so on.

>>Yesterday, my teacher asked me about my job and what I want to do, what is my hobby and so on.

>>Yesterday, my teacher asked me about my personal information, such as:

What is your job?, What I want to do?, What is my hobby? and so on.

I answered that I often go to the cinema for watching movie with my first son.

>>I answered that I often go to the cinema to watch a movie with my first son.

And I started to talk about movie abstract.

>>And I started talking about abstract movies.

That movie\'s title was a \"Brave\" It was a fictional anmimation which had a big popularity among Korean chirldren.
>>The title of the movie is \"Brave.\" It is a fictional animation movie which is popular among Korean children.

I am going to talk about remained Brave\' story with teacher on tonight.

>>I am going to talk about the movie with you tonight.

Thank you.

>>correct

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