Who is responsible for cleaning?

2026-01-28 · 첨삭 강사 Elly

학생이 쓴 원문

I don\'t think it\'s just women\'s responsibility to clean up. It\'s not just women who took out the trash or made the dust. Everyone threw away the trash and created dust to make the space dirty, but I think we should clean up together.

강사 첨삭

I don\'t think it\'s just women\'s responsibility to clean up. 
>> I don’t think cleaning up is only women’s responsibility.
OR >> Cleaning up isn’t only women’s responsibility. 

It\'s not just women who took out the trash or made the dust. 
>> It’s not just women who take out the trash or clean up the dust.

Everyone threw away the trash and created dust to make the space dirty, but I think we should clean up together.
>> Everyone throws away trash and creates dust that makes the space dirty, so I think we should clean up together.
OR >> Since everyone contributes to the mess, cleaning should be shared equally.

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