Who is that one person you can talk to about just anything?
학생이 쓴 원문
Usually I talk my problems and worries to my bestfriend. But I don’t talk about my private and family problems. Just normal thing like problem with friends or my career. I resolve myself like write my private thinking and broken heat on paper and throw away in garbage can and it is not my home but public one. This is because I don’t want to share it other people even my family. The other way to soothe my [이름]d is go to a temple. A temple where not many people came, I can cry and think alone without any sound. Some friends said “You have so many secrets, I think I don’t know you that much!”. Then I said “why? I can’t understand! I share my daily like I went to somewhere and I ate what!”. Actually I know the reason, but I don’t want to share my problem. Maybe I am strange person.
강사 첨삭
Hello there Kayla!
Thank you for sharing your ideas for this homework in this composition.
It is okay to keep personal things to yourself as long as it is not consu[이름]g you and bringing you down.
Have a nice day~
See you in class!
Usually I talk my problems and worries to my bestfriend.
>>I usually talk about my problems and worries to my best friend.
But I don’t talk about my private and family problems.
>>But I don\'t talk about my private and family problems.
Just normal thing like problem with friends or my career.
>>I just tell my friends about normal things like my career.
I resolve myself like write my private thinking and broken heat on paper and throw away in garbage can and it is not my home but public one.
>>I resolve my private matters and heartbreaks by writing them on paper and throwing them away in the public garbage can .
This is because I don’t want to share it other people even my family.
>>This is because I don\'t want to share it with other people even my family.
The other way to soothe my [이름]d is go to a temple.
>>The other way on how to soothe my [이름]d is by going to a temple.
A temple where not many people came, I can cry and think alone without any sound.
>>I can cry silently and think alone in a temple where there aren\'t a lot of people.
Some friends said “You have so many secrets, I think I don’t know you that much!”.
>>Some friends tell me \" You have so many secrets, I don\'t think I know you that much!\".
Then I said “why? \"
>>CORRECT
I can’t understand!
>>CORRECT
I share my daily like I went to somewhere and I ate what!”.
>>I share my daily life like where I go and what I eat.
Actually I know the reason, but I don’t want to share my problem.
>>CORRECT
Maybe I am strange person.
>>Maybe I am a strange person.
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