Who is the best and worst president of South Korea?

2022-01-31 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

학생이 쓴 원문

First, the worst president is Jun Du Hwan. He was the main culprit who caused the May 18 Gwangju democratization movement. A lot of people died then. And I don\'t know who is the best president of South Korea. That\'s the same. :)

강사 첨삭

Hi Elic:)

Most of my Korean student feel the same way about this. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. :)

Thank you for making an effort in answering your first homework for today. You did an awesome job! I\'m so proud of you. Please read all the corrections I wrote down below and analyze them. I know you can do it. See you soon!

First, the worst president is Jun Du Hwan.

>> CORRECT

He was the main culprit who caused the May 18 Gwangju democratization movement.

>> CORRECT

A lot of people died then.

>> CORRECT

And I don\'t know who is the best president of South Korea.

>> CORRECT

That\'s the same. :)

>> They are all the same. :)

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