Who is the best and worst president of South Korea? Explain why.
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I think that president No Muhyeon is the best president of South Korea. But I was too young to be interested in politics so, I don\'t know about all things which he did. He did his best to make people happy. Especially he conducted policies about welfare. Thanks to his efforts, we can live in the better society. Although he passed away, we are missing him. I don\'t know about the worst president of South Korea because I haven\'t never voted a president and participated in the policies in person. Now, I can\'t answer about it but I will be able to answer about it in the future.
강사 첨삭
Hi Kimberly:)
Most of my Korean student feel the same way about this. Thank you for sharing your knowledge. :)
I think that president No Muhyeon is the best president of South Korea.
>> CORRECT
But I was too young to be interested in politics so, I don\'t know about all things which he did.
>> But I was too young that time to be interested in politics so I don\'t know about everything that he has done for the country.
He did his best to make people happy.
>> CORRECT
Especially he conducted policies about welfare.
>> Especially, he conducted policies about welfare.
Thanks to his efforts, we can live in the better society.
>> Thanks to his efforts, we can live in a better society.
Although he passed away, we are missing him.
>> Although he passed away, we still miss him.
I don\'t know about the worst president of South Korea because I haven\'t never voted a president and participated in the policies in person.
>> I don\'t know about the worst president of South Korea because I haven\'t never voted for a president and participated in the policies in person.
Now, I can\'t answer about it but I will be able to answer about it in the future.
>> CORRECT
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