Who is the best person to talk to when you have the blues?

2022-10-20 · 첨삭 강사 Tricia

학생이 쓴 원문

The best people to talk to when I have depression are my family or friends. Because the people who are next to me the most in my life are friends and family. It\'s easy and comfortable to talk about because we\'ve built a relationship

강사 첨삭

Hello, [이름]! ^^
Thank you for the composition.
See you in our next class! :)

~ Teacher Tricia


The best people to talk to when I have depression are my family or friends. 
>>> CORRECT!

Because the people who are next to me the most in my life are friends and family. 
>>> CORRECT!

It\'s easy and comfortable to talk about because we\'ve built a relationship.
>>> CORRECT!

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