Who is the head of the household in a typical family in your country?
학생이 쓴 원문
In our country, a man is usually the head of a family.
I think there is a traditional side.
And in general, a person who excels economically becomes a leader.
In our country, men earn more money than women.
Of course, there are some cases where women are captains, but not many.
I am living hard with responsibility. For my family\'s happy
강사 첨삭
Hello [이름]! You did great! You made a lot of perfect sentences today!
Until the next one!
See you in class tomorrow!
~Teacher Sheila
In our country, a man is usually the head of a family.
>>CORRECT
I think there is a traditional side.
>>CORRECT
OR>>I think this is a traditional side.
And in general, a person who excels economically becomes a leader.
>>CORRECT
In our country, men earn more money than women.
>>CORRECT
Of course, there are some cases where women are captains, but not many.
>>CORRECT
OR>>Of course, there are some cases where women are superior but not many.
I am living hard with responsibility. For my family\'s happy
>>I am living hard with responsibility for my family\'s happiness.
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