Who is the healthiest person you know? Please describe them

2019-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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One of my friends is healthiest person. He is my colleague. He is always following time-schedule about himself. He have never come work late. He get up early and do exercise every day. Also He have eat meal for his body. When I see him in the morning, he takes medicine as like vitamin. I think that i have to learn it from him and i will manage to my health same as him

강사 첨삭

Good evening Mr. [이름]^^

I am impressed because these days it\'s so hard to find someone who get up early and exercise (hahaha).

Talk to you later and thank you for your effort!


Writing Task: Who is the healthiest person you know? Please describe them.


One of my friends is healthiest person.
>>One of my friends is the healthiest person.
 He is my colleague.
>>CORRECT!
 He is always following time-schedule about himself.
>>He always follows a time-set routine for himself.
He have never come work late.
>>He never came to work late.
He get up early and do exercise every day.
>>He gets up early every day and exercise.
Also He have eat meal for his body.
>>He also eats regularly for his body.
When I see him in the morning, he takes medicine as like vitamin.
>>I often see him in the morning taking vitamins.
I think that i have to learn it from him and i will manage to my health same as him.
>>I think that I have to learn from him to maintain my health like him.

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