Who is the healthiest person you know? Please describe them.

2019-10-07 · 첨삭 강사 Fiona

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It is hard to find a healtiest person that I konw/have met, however think the healtiest person may be live a life as follows. 1. the healtiest person may be think positive, even though they encount some difficulties in their life. 2. even though they do not rich so much, however they will always save some for helping neighberhood who need help, 3. the healtiest person will always work hard and do their best to finish their task. and so on

강사 첨삭

Good evening Ms. [Name]!

I agree with. It is not easy to find someone who is perfectly healthy!

These days people are always busy and they don\'t have much time to relax and refuel their energy.

Because of that, I consider them unfit or unhealthy.


Thank you Ms. [Name]!


Writing Task: Who is the healthiest person you know? Please describe them.


It is hard to find a healtiest person that I konw/have met, however think the healtiest person may be live a life as follows.
>>It\'s hard to find the healthiest person I\'ve ever met, but I think the healthiest person has a life like this.
 1. the healtiest person may be think positive, even though they encount some difficulties in their life.
>>The healthiest people can think positively even if they encounter some difficulties in their lives.
 2. even though they do not rich so much, however they will always save some for helping neighberhood who need help,
>>Although they are not so rich, they will always save to help their neighbors in need.
 3. the healtiest person will always work hard and do their best to finish their task.
 and so on
>>The healthiest person will always work hard and try their best to finish their work.

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