Who is the healthiest person you know? What do they do to stay healthy?
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I know the healthiest person is my friends Lee Woo-joo because he is very do they do to stay healthy is exercise.
So I don\'t see he\'s not going to school
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Who is the healthiest person you know? What do they do to stay healthy?
I know the healthiest person is my friends Lee Woo-joo because he is very do they do to stay healthy is exercise.
>> My friend Lee Woo-joo is the healthiest person I know because he does exercise to stay healthy.
So I don\'t see he\'s not going to school
>> So I don\'t see him not going to school.
>> OR: That\'s why he is never absent from class.
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