Who is the most beautiful/handsome celebrity in our country
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I think BTS is the most handsome celebrity in our country. Because BTS is very famous group. Also they have many Foreign and local fans.
Now many country's are know BTS. In the present, there are many fans now.
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I think BTS is the most handsome celebrity in our country. Because BTS is very famous group. Also they have many Foreign and local fans.
Now many country\'s are know BTS. In the present, there are many fans now.
I think BTS is the most handsome K-pop band in our country, because BTS is a very famous group. They also have many foreign and local fans.
Now many countries know BTS. In the present, they have many fans now.
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