Who is the most controversial politician in your country? Why was this person controversial?
학생이 쓴 원문
Although he is not a politician, President of police chief Yoon Seok-[이름] is the most controversial in Korea. He has a history of default taxes on himself and his wife. He also abused his authority to weaken the investigation of a person close to him. And there are a lot of gossip, so there is a lot of controversy now.
강사 첨삭
Hi Steve!~
Thank you for sharing this with me!
I think there are many people in our society nowadays who end up becoming power-hungry after they realize what their power could do, which is shameful.
So I hope they realize how bad they are turning into before it\'s too late.
See you next time!~
~t. Ally
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Although he is not a politician, President of police chief Yoon Seok-[이름] is the most controversial in Korea.
>> Although he is not a politician, I want to talk about the chairman of police, chief Yoon Seok-[이름]. He is the most controversial person in Korea these days.
He has a history of default taxes on himself and his wife. He also abused his authority to weaken the investigation of a person close to him. And there are a lot of gossip, so there is a lot of controversy now.
>> CORRECT!
>> Although he is not a politician, I want to talk about the chairman of police, chief Yoon Seok-[이름]. He is the most controversial person in Korea these days.
He has a history of default taxes on himself and his wife. He also abused his authority to weaken the investigation of a person close to him. And there are a lot of gossip, so there is a lot of controversy now.
>> CORRECT!
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