Who is the most controversial politician in your country? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
In the past, I was not a person who was interested in Politics.
but after The impeachment of Park, Geun-Hye, President of South Korea due to her corruption scandal,
I recognized that I had to be awake all the time and deliver my voices in order for politicians not to work for themselves,
but to work for us, citizens.
I do not have any particular politician who I hate. however I think that the most controversial politicians in our country are
ones who always criticize, blame others with any irrelevant reasons and only be against them for the sake of oppositions.
Recently in Parliamentary elections, I have seen some politicians even made fake news for the sake of their party and their elections.
They were very irresponsible and only competed. As a result, the politicians in that party were failed in the election.
Politicians must be responsible for words as officials whether they have immunity or not.
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In the past, I was not a person who was interested in Politics.
>> In the past, I was not a person who was interested in politics.
but after The impeachment of Park, Geun-Hye, President of South Korea due to her corruption scandal, I recognized that I had to be awake all the time and deliver my voices in order for politicians not to work for themselves, but to work for us, citizens.
but after The impeachment of Park, Geun-Hye, President of South Korea due to her corruption scandal, I recognized that I had to be awake all the time and deliver my voices in order for politicians not to work for themselves, but to work for us, citizens.
>> However, after the impeachment of Park, Geun-Hye, previous President of South Korea, due to her corruption scandal, I realized that I had to be awake all the time and make my voice heard for politicians not to work for themselves, but to work for us, the citizens.
I do not have any particular politician who I hate.
I do not have any particular politician who I hate.
>> There is no particular politician whom I hate.
however I think that the most controversial politicians in our country are ones who always criticize, blame others with any irrelevant reasons and only be against them for the sake of oppositions.
>> However, I think that the most controversial politicians in our country are the ones who always criticize, blame others for any irrelevant reason and only go against others for the sake of opposition.
Recently in Parliamentary elections, I have seen some politicians even made fake news for the sake of their party and their elections.
Recently in Parliamentary elections, I have seen some politicians even made fake news for the sake of their party and their elections.
>> Recently, in the parliamentary elections, I have seen some politicians making up fake news for the sake of their party and their elections.
They were very irresponsible and only competed.
They were very irresponsible and only competed.
>> They were very irresponsible competitors.
As a result, the politicians in that party were failed in the election.
>> As a result, the politicians in that party lost in the election.
Politicians must be responsible for words as officials whether they have immunity or not.
Politicians must be responsible for words as officials whether they have immunity or not.
>> Politicians must be responsible for their words as officials, whether they have immunity or not.
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