Who is the most empathetic person you know?

2016-04-18 · 첨삭 강사 Nina

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I wish I could be an empathetic person. I can’t think of any special person around me who is empathetic to others. Even when we were high school or college students before coming out to the real world and we were relatively naïve and less secular, we were all somewhat selfish to some extent. We didn't take care of others much. It is worse in the workplace where empathy has both upside and downside. People who are extremely empathic and sensitive can appear like you are weak, indecisive, and vulnerable. However, there are some people who really isten well, assess other’s emotional state, and are willing to help others who are in need. It is very important to learn how to have proper boundaries and protect our sensitive energy in order to survive in this world. Being an empath can be a gift and a curse and if we have a few tools in our toolbox. We can use these gifts to our advantage. Can we honor our gifts and sensitiveness and still have our own, solid experience in this world?

강사 첨삭

Hi Sir [이름]!

Thank you so much for your time.
I appreciate that you sent a composition today.

I am glad that you share a lot of things with me.
I hope that you are going to have an awesome week ahead of you.

See you.

Teacher Nina


I wish I could be an empathetic person.

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I can’t think of any special person around me who is empathetic to others.

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Even when we were high school or college students before coming out to the real world and we were relatively naïve and less secular, we were all somewhat selfish to some extent.

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We didn\'t take care of others much.

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It is worse in the workplace where empathy has both upside and downside.

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People who are extremely empathic and sensitive can appear like you are weak, indecisive, and vulnerable.

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However, there are some people who really isten well, assess other’s emotional state, and are willing to help others who are in need.

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>> OR: However, there are some people who really listen well, assess other’s emotional state, and are willing to help others who are in need.

It is very important to learn how to have proper boundaries and protect our sensitive energy in order to survive in this world.

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Being an empath can be a gift and a curse and if we have a few tools in our toolbox.

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We can use these gifts to our advantage.

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Can we honor our gifts and sensitiveness and still have our own, solid experience in this world?

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