Who is the most famous celebrity in Korea right now? Why do you think he/she is famous?
학생이 쓴 원문
The most famous celebrity in Korea, I think, Jae yong Lee, the chairman of Samsung electronics.
He is younger than other CEOs, and he is intelligent.
He looks luxurious and dignified. But that doesn\'t mean he wears expensive clothes or uses expensive cars.
Some times the cloths worn by him are sold out.
The public is paying attention to him.
강사 첨삭
The most famous celebrity in Korea, I think, Jae yong Lee, the chairman of Samsung electronics.
>> The most famous celebrity in Korea I think is Jae Yong Lee, the chairman of Samsung Electronics.
He is younger than other CEOs, and he is intelligent.
He is younger than other CEOs, and he is intelligent.
>> He is younger than other CEOs and he is intelligent.
He looks luxurious and dignified. But that doesn\'t mean he wears expensive clothes or uses expensive cars.
He looks luxurious and dignified. But that doesn\'t mean he wears expensive clothes or uses expensive cars.
CORRECT!
OR>> He looks luxurious and dignified. That doesn\'t imply that he wears costly attire or drives expensive cars.
Some times the cloths worn by him are sold out.
Some times the cloths worn by him are sold out.
>> Sometimes the clothes worn by him are sold out.
OR>> At times, the clothing items that he wears become unavailable for purchase.
The public is paying attention to him.
The public is paying attention to him.
CORRECT!
OR>> He is receiving attention from the public.
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