Who is the most important person in your life?
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Hello Stella!
Thank you for doing your homework. :)
I understand that English could be really difficult.
But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.
You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^
Xoxo,
T. Christina ^^
Here are my corrections for you:
I think my parents are the most important thing in my life.
>> I think my parents are the most important people in my life.
The reason is Because you rooting for when you want to give up.
>> The reason is because they root for me when I want to give up.
Teachers are important people in my life.
>> Teachers are also important people in my life.
The reason is If you ask questions that you don\'t know, they explain them so that you can understand them.
>> The reason is because if I ask questions that I don\'t know, they explain them so that I can understand them.
A friend is the most important person in my life
>> A friend is the most important person in my life.
The reason is I help my friend when I\'m depressed and have a hard time
>> The reason is my friend helps me when I\'m depressed and have a hard time.
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