Who is the most important person in your life?

2022-05-28 · 첨삭 강사 Christina

학생이 쓴 원문

1. I think my parents are the most important thing in my life. The reason is Because you rooting for when you want to give up. 2. Teachers are important people in my life. The reason is If you ask questions that you don\'t know, they explain them so that you can understand them. 3. A friend is the most important person in my life The reason is I help my friend when I\'m depressed and have a hard time

강사 첨삭

Hello Stella!

Thank you for doing your homework. :)

I understand that English could be really difficult.

But it only takes faith and confidence in yourself to perfect it.

You are a smart person and I know that with constant practice you will do great… ^_^

Xoxo,

T. Christina ^^

Here are my corrections for you:


I think my parents are the most important thing in my life.

>> I think my parents are the most important people in my life.
The reason is Because you rooting for when you want to give up.

>> The reason is because they root for me when I want to give up.
Teachers are important people in my life.

>> Teachers are also important people in my life.
The reason is If you ask questions that you don\'t know, they explain them so that you can understand them.

>> The reason is because if I ask questions that I don\'t know, they explain them so that I can understand them.
A friend is the most important person in my life

>> A friend is the most important person in my life.
The reason is I help my friend when I\'m depressed and have a hard time

>> The reason is my friend helps me when I\'m depressed and have a hard time.

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