Who is the most important person in your life?

2018-04-19 · 첨삭 강사 Grace

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Who is the most important person in your life? The most important person is me. Life is suffering. When I didn’t realize that fact. I didn’t have my dream or achieve my goal. Also I was negativity that I have. So I decided change my life and I thought “only can save my life is myself”. If I have fresh mind. I can help myself and I can help or support other people such as Family, friends and other people. I wish always know about this.

강사 첨삭

Hi, Yeong :)

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The most important person is me.

>> The most important person in my life is myself.

 Life is suffering.

>> Life is so difficult

 When I didn’t realize that fact. I didn’t have my dream or achieve my goal.

>> I didn’t realize that I don’t have any dreams or any reasons to achieve my goals.

 Also I was negativity that I have.

>>And also I was full of negativity and destruction.

So I decided change my life and I thought “only can save my life is myself”.

>> So I decided to change my life and I thought “The only person who can save my life is myself”.

 If I have fresh mind. I can help myself and I can help or support other people such as Family, friends and other people.

>> If I have a clear mind I can help and support myself, including my family, friends and other people.

 I wish always know about this.

>> I wish I will always remember this



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