Who is the most important person in your life?
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Hi, Yeong :)
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The most important person is me.
>> The most important person in my life is myself.
Life is suffering.
>> Life is so difficult
When I didn’t realize that fact. I didn’t have my dream or achieve my goal.
>> I didn’t realize that I don’t have any dreams or any reasons to achieve my goals.
Also I was negativity that I have.
>>And also I was full of negativity and destruction.
So I decided change my life and I thought “only can save my life is myself”.
>> So I decided to change my life and I thought “The only person who can save my life is myself”.
If I have fresh mind. I can help myself and I can help or support other people such as Family, friends and other people.
>> If I have a clear mind I can help and support myself, including my family, friends and other people.
I wish always know about this.
>> I wish I will always remember this
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