Who is the most important person in your life? And why her/him? :) And what do you do to make him/he
학생이 쓴 원문
The most important person in my life is my mom.
When I was a baby , she was my parent and now she is my best friend.
She is the only person who is on my side.
강사 첨삭
Awww... that is one great description of your mom..a parent and a bestfriend..
Now I\'m missing my mom too..T.T
Your mom must be very very proud of you baby..
She\'s so lucky to have you..:)
Take care of yourself always baby..
xoxoTeacher cam^^
The most important person in my life is my mom.
>>correctWhen I was a baby , she was my parent and now she is my best friend.
>>correctShe is the only person who is on my side.
>>correct
OR: She is the only person who always stays by my side.
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