Who is the most important person in your life? Why?
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What i think as most impertant person have change with my age.
When i was student, i consider friends as most important. In that age, making a good relationship with co-student is so important for student.
i was like that. after that, i think my family is so important in my life. especially korea's student tend to be attached to their parents. They are more depand than other country like u.s.a.
Now,the most important person in my life is myself. We must have all respensibility about our choice. My parents naver cover for my choice.if our mind isn't complete, we make mistake so many and we regret our wrong choice. so we must consider ourself as a present and love ourself!
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Thank you for doing your homework^^
We do make a lot of mistakes but that is part of learning. We just have to learn from our mistakes and try not to do the same mistakes again in the future.
I agree with you! We should love ourselves!
Anyway, see you later^^
~T.Chelsea
What i think as most impertant person have change with my age.
>> The most important people/person in my life changes as I grow older? When i was student, i consider friends as most important. In that age, making a good relationship with co-student is so important for student.
>> When I was a student, I considered my friends as the most important. In that age, making a good relationship with your classmates is so important for students.i was like that.
>> I was like that.
after that, i think my family is so important in my life.
>> After that, I think my family was so important in my life.
especially korea\'s student tend to be attached to their parents.
>> Especially Koreans students tend to be attached to their parents.
They are more depand than other country like u.s.a.
>> They are more dependent than other countries like the USA.Now,the most important person in my life is myself.
>> CORRECT^^
We must have all respensibility about our choice.
>> We must have all the responsibilities about our choices.
My parents naver cover for my choice.
>> Do you mean, \"My parents never support my choices\"
>> My parents never support my decisions.
if our mind isn\'t complete, we make mistake so many and we regret our wrong choice.
>> If we are didn\'t fully think about it, we make a lot of mistakes and we regret the wrong choices/ decisions we made.
so we must consider ourself as a present and love ourself!
>> So we must consider ourselves as a gift and let\'s love ourselves!
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