who is the most important person in your life? why?
학생이 쓴 원문
Of course that's my family.
I think my healing resouce is them.
Family doesn't change.
They're only stay at there and part of me.
I love my family and I will.
강사 첨삭
Hi there^^
I agree with you^^ Family will always be there for you whatever happens.
Anyway, I made some corrections and I hope that I was able to meet your points.
See you tomorrow!
~T.Chelsea
Of course that\'s my family.
>> CORRECT^^I think my healing resouce is them. >> I think they are my source of strength.
Family doesn\'t change. >> CORRECT^^
They\'re only stay at there and part of me.
>> They will always be part of me and they are always there for me.I love my family and I will.
>> I love my family and I will always love them.
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