Who is the most important person in your life? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
If I must choose person, I want to choose my mom. I think most of people likey to select parents. I also want to choose my mom. The reosons why I choose her are due to many cause.
First, I have been taught by her about personaliity. She has teached me responsiblity, donation, and consideration. Because of her teaching, I can be a better person.
Second, She is a nice teacher. When I have a problem for studying, she always gives me help. I'm very thankful for it.
Third, I think she is my role model. She is always considerate for everyone, so I want to become person who is resemble with my mom.
강사 첨삭
Good evening [이름]!
Thank you for doing your homework.
I had a great time reading your composition.
I think so, too.
That most people will choose their parents.
That\'s nice.
T. Barbara**,
If I must choose person, I want to choose my mom.
>> If I must choose a person, I want to choose my mom.
I think most of people likey to select parents.
>> I think most of people are likely to select their parents.
I also want to choose my mom.
>> Correct!
OR:>> Also, I want to choose my mom.
The reosons why I choose her are due to many cause.
>> The reasons why I choose her are due to many causes.
First, I have been taught by her about personaliity.
>> First, I have been taught by her about personality.
She has teached me responsiblity, donation, and consideration.
>> She has taught me about responsibility, generosity and consideration.
Because of her teaching, I can be a better person.
>> It\'s because of her teaching, I can be a better person.Second, She is a nice teacher.
>> Second, she is a nice teacher.
When I have a problem for studying, she always gives me help.
>> When I have a problem in studying, she is always helping me.
I\'m very thankful for it.
>> Correct!
OR:>> I\'m grateful.Third, I think she is my role model.
>> Correct!
OR:>> Third, she is a role model to me.
She is always considerate for everyone, so I want to become person who is resemble with my mom.
>> She is always considerate to everyone, so I want to become a person who resembles my mom.
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