Who is the most inspiring person in your life?
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Every people,who work in military they try to scare someone to newcomer therefore they scolded me and shouted me they even make me in nervise.
I don't know why people do that so I was bothered by my siniors a lot but in middle of them there was a good person who's personality is kind, good, honest and tureful person.
Actually, I cannot dare explain him as he is the most respectful person in my life.
First time, I was nervise a lot so I always took a back seat when my sinior was around me therefore I was getting a timid person and afride of doing something but the person I mentioned gave me courage and passion.
He said that you can do that everyting but now, you don't know manythings about military so I will teach you a little and little and if you have questions, ask me anytimes!
finally I became a brave person in the military.
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Every people,who work in military they try to scare someone to newcomer therefore they scolded me and shouted me they even make me in nervise.
>>People who work in the military tries to scare newcomer. During my first days at the military, they scolded and shouted at me which made me nervous even more.
I don\'t know why people do that so I was bothered by my siniors a lot but in middle of them there was a good person who\'s personality is kind, good, honest and tureful person.
>> I don\'t know why people act that way that is why I was bothered by my senior. But one of them was good, kind, honest and truthful.
Actually, I cannot dare explain him as he is the most respectful person in my life.
>>Actually, I considered him as the most respected person in my life.
First time, I was nervise a lot so I always took a back seat when my sinior was around me therefore I was getting a timid person and afride of doing something but the person I mentioned gave me courage and passion.
>>At first, I am always nervous so I became a timid person and afraid of doing something when my seniors are around. But the person I mentioned gave me courage and passion.
He said that you can do that everyting but now, you don\'t know manythings about military so I will teach you a little and little and if you have questions, ask me anytimes!
finally I became a brave person in the military.
>> He said that you can do everything but right now you don\'t know many things about military so I will teach you little by little and if you have questions a you can ask me anytime. Finally I became a brave person in the military.
>>People who work in the military tries to scare newcomer. During my first days at the military, they scolded and shouted at me which made me nervous even more.
I don\'t know why people do that so I was bothered by my siniors a lot but in middle of them there was a good person who\'s personality is kind, good, honest and tureful person.
>> I don\'t know why people act that way that is why I was bothered by my senior. But one of them was good, kind, honest and truthful.
Actually, I cannot dare explain him as he is the most respectful person in my life.
>>Actually, I considered him as the most respected person in my life.
First time, I was nervise a lot so I always took a back seat when my sinior was around me therefore I was getting a timid person and afride of doing something but the person I mentioned gave me courage and passion.
>>At first, I am always nervous so I became a timid person and afraid of doing something when my seniors are around. But the person I mentioned gave me courage and passion.
He said that you can do that everyting but now, you don\'t know manythings about military so I will teach you a little and little and if you have questions, ask me anytimes!
finally I became a brave person in the military.
>> He said that you can do everything but right now you don\'t know many things about military so I will teach you little by little and if you have questions a you can ask me anytime. Finally I became a brave person in the military.
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