Who is the oldest person you know? How is their view of the world different than yours?
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Hello Sir [이름]!
Happy Thursday!
Wow! I admire the person you mentioned below.
I want to meet him. ^.^
I am sure that it will be inspiring to hear stories from him.
See you.
Teacher Nina
The oldest person I know in person is the gentleman who is a member of the tennis club I belong to.
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He is 88 years old, but stays relatively healthy even to run to hit the ball when planning tennis.
>> He is 88 years old, but stays relatively healthy even to run to hit the ball when playing tennis.
My father is 83 years old, younger than him, but have trouble walking due to the problem with his knees.
>> My father is 83 years old, younger than him, but has trouble walking due to the problem with his knees.
Although he is quite old, he doesn’t remain seated even for a minute and never stops moving around all the time.
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He is very diligent.
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When he comes to a tennis court, he does all the chores like cleaning the locker room, taking out the trash, fixing the fence, rooting the weeds out, etc.
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I respect him for his good personality and setting a good example for others.
>> I respect him for his good personality and setting a good example to others.
However, his view of the world or social phenomena is way different from mine and we can never narrow the gap.
He is so conservative and never accept progressive views.
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He doesn’t value democratism.
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He even misses the time of military dictatorship.
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He harshly criticizes and condemns any anti-government protests.
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