Who is the person that I admire the most

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I think the person that I most admire is Jaclin Kennedy.

>> I think the person that I most admire is Jacqueline Kennedy.
First of all, she had her own attractions.

>> CORRECT!

She was very popular and was a queen of Debutante Ball.

>> She was very popular and was a queen of the Debutante Ball.

Although her family was poor, she could get marry John.F Kennedy because she did her best to be a charming girl.

>> Although her family was poor, she got married to John.F Kennedy because she did her best to be a charming girl.
Also, she read a lot of books to gain knowledges.

>> Also, she read a lot of books to gain knowledge.

For example, reading made her wise so other presidents of countries liked to talk to her.

>> CORRECT!

At first, they didn\'t like young presdient in US but after talking to Jaclin, they changed their mind and were open to John F Kenny as well.

>> At first, they didn\'t like young presdient in the US but after talking to Jacqueline, they changed their mind and were open to John F Kenny as well.

She even widened her husband\'s politics position. 

>> She even widened her husband\'s political position. 
I envy her.

>> CORRECT!

She was attractive(even if she was not that beautiful) and wise unlike other barbie girls at that time.

>> CORRECT!
For these reasons, I think the person thatI most admire is Jaclin Kennedy.

>> For these reasons, I think the person that I most admire is Jacqueline Kennedy.