Who is the person you admire the most? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
It is Jeremy Bentham. It\'s because he is an philosophist and I thought his thinking is really same with me. So I started to read about him and studied. His thinking is really objective and smart. I think he is my favorite person who has same critical thinking.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Daisy. ^^
Thank you very much for sharing who your favorite person is.
I have noticed that you like reading about philosophers and that\'s truly impressive. :)
You have a lot to learn from Jeremy Bentham and I think he is a good role model for you.
The person admire the most is Robert Kiyosaki.
Anyway, I hope you\'re doing great at the moment.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
Thank you very much for sharing who your favorite person is.
I have noticed that you like reading about philosophers and that\'s truly impressive. :)
You have a lot to learn from Jeremy Bentham and I think he is a good role model for you.
The person admire the most is Robert Kiyosaki.
Anyway, I hope you\'re doing great at the moment.
See you in class later. ^^
~Teacher Charry
>> CORRECT!
It\'s because he is an philosophist and I thought his thinking is really same with me.
>> It\'s because he is a philosopher and I thought his way of thinking is really the same with me.
So I started to read about him and studied.
>> So I started to read and study about him .
His thinking is really objective and smart.
>> His way of thinking is really objective and smart.
I think he is my favorite person who has same critical thinking.
>> I think he is my favorite person who is critical at thinking.
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