Who is the person you would like to be stranded with on a deserted island, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
It\'s a funny question. Absolutely, my future wife. If I can do it, I want to make a living with my own family in there. I love that I can feel a freedom in a disconnected place from the society. Also, there\'s nothing that I should care about it as making money, living, my own house and etc.
강사 첨삭
Cheerful Friday, Elic! Disregard all the awful things you\'ve experienced for the current week and have an awesome end of the week.
It\'s a funny question.
>>> CORRECT.
Absolutely, my future wife.
>>> CORRECT.
If I can do it, I want to make a living with my own family in there.
>>> If it\'s possible, I want to make a living with my own family there.
I love that I can feel a freedom in a disconnected place from the society.
>>> I love that I can feel freedom in a place disconnected from society.
Also, there\'s nothing that I should care about it as making money, living, my own house and etc.
>>> Also, there\'s nothing that I should care about, such as making money, living, owning my own house, etc.
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