Who is your best buddy?
학생이 쓴 원문
1. Who is your best buddy?
Hee soo Kim. my classmate in high school. I have got along with him for around 45 years. and I have a few familiar friends.
2. How do keep in touch with your distant friends?
I often call my friend to ask his health and how to take care of ourselves. We decide a place and time to meet. When we get together
and hang out with talking about our bygone days.
강사 첨삭
Hi Huje,
Thank you so much for your ideas today!
Have a nice and safe day!
Teacher Elly.
Who is your best buddy?
1. Who is your best buddy?
Hee soo Kim.
Hee soo Kim.
>>My best buddy is Hee soo Kim.
my classmate in high school.
>>He is my classmate in high school.
I have got along with him for around 45 years.
>>I had to get along with him for around 45 years.
And I have a few familiar friends.
CORRECT!
or>>I also have a few acquaintances.
2. How do keep in touch with your distant friends?
I often call my friend to ask his health and how to take care of ourselves.
2. How do keep in touch with your distant friends?
I often call my friend to ask his health and how to take care of ourselves.
>>I often call my friend to ask about his health and we talk about how to take care of ourselves.
We decide a place and time to meet.
>>We will decide on a place and the time to meet.
When we get together and hang out with talking about our bygone days.
>>When we get together and hang out, we talk about our bygone days.
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