Who is your closest neighbor?

2019-08-02 · 첨삭 강사 Debbie

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I don\'t have any closet neighbor. I usually go to work early in the morning and return home late in the night. And during the weekends I also usually bring my kids to the kids cafe. Thus I had less chance to meet neighbors. The only neighbor I met was my daughter friend\'s mother. I knew my daughter has a best friend and she also knew my daughter. So she first ask me and my daughter to go out together. We just met twice then they moved away. These days my daughter made a new friend we also meet at weekends. But they live a little far away from us.

강사 첨삭

Thank you for answering. Here are my corrections ^^

-Teacher Debbie

I don\'t have any closet neighbor.
>> I don\' have any neighbor that is close to me.
I usually go to work early in the morning and return home late in the night.
>> correct
And during the weekends I also usually bring my kids to the kids cafe.
>> correct
Thus I had less chance to meet neighbors.
>> Thus, I had lesser chance to meet my neighbors.
The only neighbor I met was my daughter friend\'s mother.
>> The only neighbor I met was the mother of my daughter\'s friend.
I knew my daughter has a best friend and she also knew my daughter.
>> correct
So she first ask me and my daughter to go out together.
>> So she first asked me and my daughter to go out together.
We just met twice then they moved away.
>> correct
These days my daughter made a new friend we also meet at weekends.
>> My daughter has made a new friend so we also meet them on weekends.
But they live a little far away from us.
>> correct

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