Who is your fashion role modle? Why?
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I think my fashion role model is my before teakwood academy teacher because teacher is very cool
So my fashion role model is my before teakwood academy teacher.
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Jean~~
Who is your fashion role modle? Why?
I think my fashion role model is my before teakwood academy teacher because teacher is very cool
>>> I think my fashion role model is my former teacher from Teakwood Academy because she/he was very cool.
So my fashion role model is my before teakwood academy teacher.
>>> So, my fashion role model is my former teacher from Teakwood Academy.
>>> OR: In short, my fashion role model is my stylish former teacher from Teakwood Academy.
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