Who is your favorite athlete?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite athlete is yeon-kyong Kim.
She is volleyball player. I watched many games that she played in this 2020 Tokyo olympic.
She is a leader for Korea women vollyball team.
And she is the best player in the world.
During the game, she encouraged members to play well.
Also, she scored a lot of points.
Even after the game finished, she met referee who gave her red card and she made up with him.
I think that she\'s go talented and her attitude is also good.
강사 첨삭
Hi Ye [이름],
It was so nice to meet you. Thank you for telling me about your favorite athlete, she sounds amazing! :)
Regards,
T. Angelica.
My favorite athlete is yeon-kyong Kim.>>CORRECT.
She is volleyball player.
She is volleyball player.
>>She is a volleyball player
I watched many games that she played in this 2020 Tokyo olympic.
>>I watched the many games that she played in the 2020 Tokyo Olympics.
She is a leader for Korea women vollyball team.
She is a leader for Korea women vollyball team.
>>She is the team captain of the Korean Women\'s Volleyball Team.
And she is the best player in the world.
>>CORRECT.
During the game, she encouraged members to play well.
During the game, she encouraged members to play well.
>>CORRECT.
Also, she scored a lot of points.
Also, she scored a lot of points.
>>CORRECT.
Even after the game finished, she met referee who gave her red card and she made up with him.
Even after the game finished, she met referee who gave her red card and she made up with him.
>>After the game finished, she even met the referee who gave her a red card and made up with him.
OR>> After the game ended, she even talked to the referee who gave her a red card and reconciled with him.
I think that she\'s go talented and her attitude is also good.
I think that she\'s go talented and her attitude is also good.
>>I think that her attitude is good and that she\'s very talented.
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