Who is your favorite celebrity, and why?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite celebrity is a Damons year. He is a singer who has deep fans. The reason why i like himI because i love his own style music and voice.
강사 첨삭
Hi, Elizabeth!
Thank you for sharing. Also, I believe you feel relaxed when you listen to his songs.
See you later!
~Casey
My favorite celebrity is a Damons year.
>> My favorite celebrity is Damons year.
He is a singer who has deep fans.
>> He is a singer who has a lot of fans.
The reason why i like himI because i love his own style music and voice.
>> I like him because I love his music style and voice.
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