Who is your favorite Hollywood actor?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite Hollywood actor is Tom Cruise.
I've seen the movie "Mission impossible" played by Tom Cruise.
His play was great and perfect.
He is not tall but handsome.
Also I think He has good talent.
I saw his movie "Knight and Day" 3 years ago.
Hi is old (He is 53 years old) and his action is slow a little.
But He is still passionate and good actor.
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]!
Tom Cruise is indeed a brilliant actor.
A lot of people like you, really notice his height!^^kkk
Here are some facts about him:
Thomas \"Tom\" Cruise is an American film actor and producer.
He has been nominated for three Academy Awards and has won three Golden Globe Awards.
He started his career at age 19 in the 1981 film Endless Love.
Great choice [이름]!^^ I love him too.... I also like Brad Pitt and Johnny Depp. ^^
Thanks for sharing!
See you in our class!
Teacher Reina *,*
My favorite Hollywood actor is Tom Cruise.
>>> correct!^^
I\'ve seen the movie \"Mission impossible\" played by Tom Cruise.
>>> correct!^^
His play was great and perfect.
>>> correct!^^
>>> OR: His acting was great and perfect.
He is not tall but handsome.
>>> correct!^^
Also I think He has good talent.
>>> I also think he has a good talent.
I saw his movie \"Knight and Day\" 3 years ago.
>>> correct!^^
Hi is old (He is 53 years old) and his action is slow a little.
>>> He is old (53 years old) and his action is a little slow.
But He is still passionate and good actor.
>>> But he is still passionate and a good actor.
Tom Cruise is indeed a brilliant actor.
A lot of people like you, really notice his height!^^kkk
Here are some facts about him:
Thomas \"Tom\" Cruise is an American film actor and producer.
He has been nominated for three Academy Awards and has won three Golden Globe Awards.
He started his career at age 19 in the 1981 film Endless Love.
Great choice [이름]!^^ I love him too.... I also like Brad Pitt and Johnny Depp. ^^
Thanks for sharing!
See you in our class!
Teacher Reina *,*
My favorite Hollywood actor is Tom Cruise.
>>> correct!^^
I\'ve seen the movie \"Mission impossible\" played by Tom Cruise.
>>> correct!^^
His play was great and perfect.
>>> correct!^^
>>> OR: His acting was great and perfect.
He is not tall but handsome.
>>> correct!^^
Also I think He has good talent.
>>> I also think he has a good talent.
I saw his movie \"Knight and Day\" 3 years ago.
>>> correct!^^
Hi is old (He is 53 years old) and his action is slow a little.
>>> He is old (53 years old) and his action is a little slow.
But He is still passionate and good actor.
>>> But he is still passionate and a good actor.
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