Who is your favorite king/emperor of all time? Why?
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My favorite king is king Sejong. He was a king of Joseon. He created Hangeul and upgraded the frame of politics for people.
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My favorite king is king Sejong. He was a king of Joseon.
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He created Hangeul and upgraded the frame of politics for people.
>> He created Hangeul and upgraded the frame of politics for the people.
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