Who is your favorite leader and why?

2022-03-15 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Who is your favorite leader and why? There are many famous leaders such as Abraham Lincoln, Nelson Mandella. But I see a good leader every day at my house. As you may have guessed, it is my father. All of the fathers are leaders for their families.

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Hi [이름]!

Yes, salute to all fathers! Father are great leaders especially to their children. :) 

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There are many famous leaders such as Abraham Lincoln, Nelson Mandella.
>> There are many famous leaders such as Abraham Lincoln and Nelson Mandela but I see a good leader every day at my house.

But I see a good leader every day at my house.
>> CONNECT WITH THE SENTENCE ABOVE. 

As you may have guessed, it is my father.
>> CORRECT

All of the fathers are leaders for their families
>> CORRECT

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