Who is your favorite singer or band? What do you like about their music?
학생이 쓴 원문
My favorite singer is Stevie Wonder.
He is legendary singer and composer of the black-music.
Almost every singers or composers have their own style.
So listener feel cliche from one singer as time goes by.
However, Stevie is not.
He composed and sing too many genre such as Funk, Gospel, Soul, Jazz etc.
That\'s why I like him.
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Hi! I’m delighted you dedicated time to completing the homework. You did a wonderful job expressing your experiences—keep up the great effort!^^
~~Teacher Ryka^^
My favorite singer is Stevie Wonder.
>> CORRECT
He is legendary singer and composer of the black-music.
>> He is a legendary singer and composer of Black music.
Almost every singers or composers have their own style.
>> Almost every singer or composer has their own style,
So listener feel cliche from one singer as time goes by.
>> so listeners can start to feel a sense of cliché from one artist over time.
However, Stevie is not.
>> However, Stevie is not like that.
He composed and sing too many genre such as Funk, Gospel, Soul, Jazz etc.
>> He has composed and sung in many genres, such as funk, gospel, soul, jazz, and more.
That\'s why I like him.
>> CORRECT
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