Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice?(ANSWER)
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HOMEWORK:
Who is your hero and what qualities make them your choice?
Please answer in complete sentences.
YOUR ANSWER:
My
hero is \'Ant Man.\'
Because Ant man can be very small and it is very strong.
I felt \'Small one also has a great power.\'
I was encouraged by that character.
I also got hope that I could do it.
CORRECTIONS:
My hero is \'Ant Man.\'
Ant man can be very small but very strong.
I felt small ones also have great powers.
I was encouraged by that character.
I also got hope that I could do it.
.
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** Dear [이름], thank you for making time to share your thoughts in the homework. 😊 Please take note of the corrections. ^^
Cheers!! Take care. J
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