Who is your idol and why?

2021-07-13 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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I respected person is King Sejong. Beacause King Sejong invented Hangeul.

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Hi [이름]! ^^

The main reason why we believe in idols is the fact that they can do something we consider huge and amazing. An idol is simply a person who is capable of doing something you\'d really like to but always failed to achieve. In such circumstances, our heroes\' victories become our own

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I respected person is King Sejong.

>> The person that I respect is King Sejong because he invented \"Hangeul\".

Beacause King Sejong invented Hangeul.

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