Who is your life mentor and why?
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Obviously, it\'s my parents. except for them I guess it\'s a teacher who is my 3 years of high school. A kind of things that I heard are very helpful. She made advices about how to make a living and live in my life. So I used to follow her.
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Happy Monday, Elic! May this day be beautiful and mark the beginning of a wonderful and very productive week. Don\'t let anyone interfere what you can do. ^^
You did great today :)
Obviously, it\'s my parents. except for them I guess it\'s a teacher who is my 3 years of high school.
>> Obviously, it\'s my parents but aside from them I also consider my 3rd year high school teacher as my life mentor.
A kind of things that I heard are very helpful. She made advices about how to make a living and live in my life.
>> She taught me a lot of things that are really useful, she gave me advices on how to make a living and how to live my life to the fullest.
So I used to follow her.
>> So, I followed all her advice.
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