Who is your role model?
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Who is your role model?
There were lots of my role model.They were with me while I`ve been living my life. They were my parents, teachers, bosses, and neighbors.
Do you think you can be a role model?
I`m not sure, but I think I can be a role model when someone ask me for help or I do a good things for somebody.
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Thank you for this Sir Hyuji!
Who is your role model?
There were lots of my role model.
Who is your role model?
There were lots of my role model.
>>> I had a lot of role models.
They were with me while I`ve been living my life.
>>> correct
They were my parents, teachers, bosses, and neighbors.
>>> correct
>>> correct
Do you think you can be a role model?
I`m not sure, but I think I can be a role model when someone ask me for help or I do a good things for somebody.
I`m not sure, but I think I can be a role model when someone ask me for help or I do a good things for somebody.
>>> correct
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