Who is your role model in your life? Why?
학생이 쓴 원문
as I told you before. my role model is Son HeungMin,soccer player. He is also the member of national team. He is always humble whether amatuar or professional player. If I am like star player like him, I probably show off people around me. but he never did it. He also bulit stadium to learn young players who have no money. That\'s why he is my role model
강사 첨삭
Hi [이름]! We all have role models in our lives that have such a huge role on what kind of person we are today. We look up to them a lot. We gain a lot of lessons as well. It\'s nice that you show them respect that they deserve. May all the things you\'ve learned from him be passed to more generations. :)
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As I told you before. my role model is Son HeungMin,soccer player.
>>As I told you before. my role model is Son Heung Min, a soccer player.
He is also the member of national team.
>> He is also a member of the soccer national team.
He is always humble whether amatuar or professional player.
>>He is always humble whether he plays with armature or professional players.
If I am like star player like him, I probably show off people around me.
>>> If I was like star player like him, I would probably show off to people around me but he never did.
but he never did it.
>>CONNECT WTIH THE SENTENCE ABOVE.
He also bulit stadium to learn young players who have no money.
>>He also built a stadium for young player who have no money to learn in.
That\'s why he is my role model
>>CORRECT
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