Who is your role model in your life? Why?

2021-04-09 · 첨삭 강사 Elise

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Who is your role model in your life? Why? I don\'t have my role model in my life. Sucessful pepole have a good influence for me. If I have a sucessful life and i\'m not happy, It is good for nothing. I just trust and love me.

강사 첨삭

Hi Moniica! I think your role model is yourself :). Nobody inspires you the most but yourself. We all have role models in our lives that have such a huge role on what kind of person we are today. I also hope that you can inspire other people as well. :)

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I don\'t have my role model in my life.

>>CORRECT

Sucessful pepole have a good influence for me.

>>Successful people have a good influence to me.

If I have a sucessful life and i\'m not happy, It is good for nothing.

>>If I have a successful life but I\'m not happy, I think it would mean nothing or I will still feel empty.

I just trust and love me.

>>I just trust and love myself.

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